I like the original (printed in red). It's understandable to anyone who knows some high school physics, and easily explainable to anyone capable of understanding such (as you yourself do above).
The second twist would be funny in the hypothetical situation where the first joke became popular, as a followup.
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Date: 2004-07-31 02:31 am (UTC)The second twist would be funny in the hypothetical situation where the first joke became popular, as a followup.